Script Services

$75.00$200.00

40 point feedback rubric includes feedback on

  • characters, world, story
  • episodic launch
  • scenic journey
  • pacing, tone, voice
  • act breaks, act structure, length
  • consistency, narrative devices, continuity
  • + more!

Phone call will break down notes, offer pitches if solicited, and answer any questions.

Plus I want to help you meet your deadlines (something we all have trouble with) so if you complete a draft after our consult, you’ll receive $25 back. It’s like you’re paying yourself to write! If you’ve taken Ben’s class, use the code benrules for $25 off. It’s the honor system, but also I’ll be able to tell pretty quick.

After receiving confirmation of purchase, please email jakeupjabbour@gmail.com with a copy of your script.

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Description

Got a script you’d like feedback on? I can help. I’ve been teaching pilot writing through Ben Axelrad’s Pilot Writing School for more than two years. I’ve optioned my own pilot as well as helped others polish drafts that placed in competitions, or got them representation. I’ve created a 40-point rubric to help simplify the writing/revising/and re-writing process. Plus I want to help you meet your deadlines (something we all have trouble with) so if you complete a draft after our consult, you’ll receive $25 back. It’s like you’re paying yourself to write! If you’ve taken Ben’s class, use the code benrules for $25 off. It’s the honor system, but also I’ll be able to tell pretty quick.

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Level of Feedback

Rubric Only, Rubric + 20 minute phone call, Rubric + 20 minute phone call + follow-up after revisions

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